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#1 �ƻ

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Posted 03 May 2006 - 05:33 PM

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Im getting back into it. Again followed bits and pieces of a tut not a lot of it. I made the halos around the render. Umm...thats about it. C&C

#2 Justin

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Posted 03 May 2006 - 07:04 PM

Nice backround, ok text... The render is kinda iffy.. Kinda low quality looking, I just plain dont like the render =\

But anyway for the halos, I dont like how their like that. I think maybe you should make them get smaller to bigger, or smaller to bigger to smaller like:

.oOo. OR .oO

>_>;

They just seem to kinda bind him, and their just there.

#3 toaofgamecube

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Posted 03 May 2006 - 08:45 PM

pretty good, but sora looks.... hand-drawn, to put it mildly.
And hand-drawn pictures never go well in hi-res computer art

#4 Fox

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Posted 03 May 2006 - 09:45 PM

Apart from what has already been said... I think you perhaps could make the text 'Speed Dial' stand out a bit more. :)

#5 Punk

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Posted 04 May 2006 - 03:47 AM

Apart from what has already been said... I think you perhaps could make the text 'Speed Dial' stand out a bit more. :)



Untile you said that, I didnt even see the 'Speed Dial' :o

Yeah, definately make that stand out more. I like the rest though.

#6 Sakura

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Posted 04 May 2006 - 06:13 AM

The top most halo is drawn to where it looks like it goes through his head, rather than around.

#7 Niche

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Posted 04 May 2006 - 08:16 AM

The halo is cool, it just doesnt suit the sig...urm also i would make the text stand out more. BUT! i am loving the background ^_^

#8 �ƻ

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Posted 04 May 2006 - 12:44 PM

Ok updated it. Got rid of render and halos and also made text mroe readable.

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#9 Charmender

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Posted 04 May 2006 - 01:03 PM

now theres too much balnk space try a difff render

#10 SupermanFTM

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Posted 04 May 2006 - 01:42 PM

Mhmm, I love the text and backround, but the render and halos...just take away from it I think. They style is nice on it's own though :p

#11 cokiwah

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Posted 04 May 2006 - 03:20 PM

no depth, looks like colour + brush then crosshatch filter


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