Im getting back into it. Again followed bits and pieces of a tut not a lot of it. I made the halos around the render. Umm...thats about it. C&C
Another New One
Started by �ƻ, May 03 2006 05:33 PM
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#1
Posted 03 May 2006 - 05:33 PM
Im getting back into it. Again followed bits and pieces of a tut not a lot of it. I made the halos around the render. Umm...thats about it. C&C
#2
Posted 03 May 2006 - 07:04 PM
Nice backround, ok text... The render is kinda iffy.. Kinda low quality looking, I just plain dont like the render =\
But anyway for the halos, I dont like how their like that. I think maybe you should make them get smaller to bigger, or smaller to bigger to smaller like:
.oOo. OR .oO
>_>;
They just seem to kinda bind him, and their just there.
But anyway for the halos, I dont like how their like that. I think maybe you should make them get smaller to bigger, or smaller to bigger to smaller like:
.oOo. OR .oO
>_>;
They just seem to kinda bind him, and their just there.
#3
Posted 03 May 2006 - 08:45 PM
pretty good, but sora looks.... hand-drawn, to put it mildly.
And hand-drawn pictures never go well in hi-res computer art
And hand-drawn pictures never go well in hi-res computer art
#4
Posted 03 May 2006 - 09:45 PM
Apart from what has already been said... I think you perhaps could make the text 'Speed Dial' stand out a bit more.
#5
Posted 04 May 2006 - 03:47 AM
Apart from what has already been said... I think you perhaps could make the text 'Speed Dial' stand out a bit more.
Untile you said that, I didnt even see the 'Speed Dial'
Yeah, definately make that stand out more. I like the rest though.
#6
Posted 04 May 2006 - 06:13 AM
The top most halo is drawn to where it looks like it goes through his head, rather than around.
#7
Posted 04 May 2006 - 08:16 AM
The halo is cool, it just doesnt suit the sig...urm also i would make the text stand out more. BUT! i am loving the background
#8
Posted 04 May 2006 - 12:44 PM
Ok updated it. Got rid of render and halos and also made text mroe readable.
#9
Posted 04 May 2006 - 01:03 PM
now theres too much balnk space try a difff render
#10
Posted 04 May 2006 - 01:42 PM
Mhmm, I love the text and backround, but the render and halos...just take away from it I think. They style is nice on it's own though
#11
Posted 04 May 2006 - 03:20 PM
no depth, looks like colour + brush then crosshatch filter
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