13 replies to this topic

[Cam]

Since ive posted a sig..

And here ya go!

This is the first i've done in months and months..

[Zakk]

I looked at this for like fifteen minutes...
And then realised there's a black guy in the background. O.o

[Nick]

Render needs to be more visible.

[sarah.]

It's a little too colorful imo, and the render is actually quite hard to see.

[Silk]

Gah, it looks too messy and uncontrolled. The idea is great, but just get rid of the scanlines and some of the colour splats.

[Nick]

I'm looking really hard Zulfi, but I cannot see any scanlines.

[Silk]

The 'X's on the left and the right. Poor choice of wording on my part, sorry.

[Nick]

Oh yeah, that patterning doesn't look good in my opinion, either.

[Jenna]

hehe the head is kinda just floating out there

[Bilal]

lol...good idea but yeah the pattern doesn't look too good and make the render a bit more visible as well as taking out some of the solour splats...

[j0k3r210]

its um interesting but the effects and colors seem a lil overdone to me

[Grizzly]

The effect looks good but seems a bit overdone. Try controlling where you apply it to and try to leave more of the render visible as others have suggested. Some negative space would also give you more versatility in regards to text.

[Cam]

it looked good late last night but now its crappy!

[Jeff]

I like it. I think you should have more of a focal point. Maybe if I can get my hands on a psd of it, I could try out some lighting with it?

Anyways, I like the style.