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[Tyler.]

C/C?


v2

[Big Joe]

Where is she from? Oh and face is too light for me.

[Black Flame]

The lighting on her face and neck is WAAAAAY too bright. It looks like you were trying to pull off a glowing effect from her. It just glows TOO much

Edited by ßlack ƒlame, 12 August 2007 - 06:44 PM.

[Ives]

Talk about way to friggin bright. Make it bright, but dont make it affect her face.

[Zeeky]

The light is JUST in her face and WAY too strong. She goes from like 3D to 2D and it doesn't look nice at all... Light is nice, but dont go overboard with it.

[spottedtiger]

i have the same issue with those people above i'm sure you don't need to read another one

Design and background look great, overall you can see where this is going just fix the light
your idea is really really good

BigJoe: Belle is from Disney Classic Beauty and the Beast

[DudeOnline]

same as what was said above.

[philywilly]

same as what was said above.

Agreed.

Anyways, second piece by you that I've noticed the lighting is really bad. Especially this one... I mean, you can clearly see that half her face is way too bright.

[Tyler.]

xD I did go overboard on the light. And text placement was wrong on my part x-x Tried fixing the light, adding v2.

[DudeOnline]

she still looks like shes about to go Nuke like Peter in Heroes

[Tyler.]

Not my fault spotlights are bright. /excuse

[Apilot]

its still pretty darn glarey, the lighting should be concentrated on top of her head more not so much as her face.. and the text is a bit cut off. its nice though.

love the backround though.

[DudeOnline]

Not my fault spotlights are bright. /excuse

Hate to be harsh, but your are in the GFX team for a reason...this is crap.

[Tyler.]

Yeah, I know it's not my best xD But working with a box feels weird to me, harder to do than a regular sig size.


If the lighting's on TOP of her head... then she wouldn't have any light at all o.O

[Apilot]

Yeah, I know it's not my best xD But working with a box feels weird to me, harder to do than a regular sig size.
If the lighting's on TOP of her head... then she wouldn't have any light at all o.O

Top and sides is my decree

[Tyler.]

Added v3

[philywilly]

v3 is undercontrasted or something. Besides.. this whole piece, it's just not working. Take a break from gfx or start following tuts, you gotta freshen up your mind a little.

[DudeOnline]

v3 is undercontrasted or something. Besides.. this whole piece, it's just not working. Take a break from gfx or start following tuts, you gotta freshen up your mind a little.

QFE

If all else fails, just scrap it and start over again.