GrantJohno

you need to bring out the focal more imo. It kinda needs sharpening up to add more of a focal and a little depth. It all looks blurred to me.. sharpen all the effects but erase all the sharpen which is covering the backgroud. this way you will have a nice focal and it will be easier to tell whats the background and what isn't

lol the text was a mess about xD.. i told sarah what it said xD lol i was a little bored xD

Thanks for the comments people